Creative Writing A Short Story - 764 Words

How about, instead, I invite Glenn over and the two of us will watch, then send you a written critique with recommendations for improvement, Brett grinned as he tweaked Elenas nipple, his enjoyment of her reaction to that paling in comparison to the squeal she emitted when her panties landed on his neighbours doorstep. He shrugged when she glanced back, To apologise for all that noise you made last night. After theyd entered his apartment and hed stopped on his way to the kitchen to pirouette around, he was uncertain of which of the offered options shed choose. Would Elena suck him off to completion right there, his urgent need for relief not all helped by the way her tight ass cheeks had flexed against his hardon with each step†¦show more content†¦If Brett hadnt already been fully erect, the sight that greeted him would swiftly have fixed that. Elena was spread out on the king-size flanked on either side by mahogany dressers, the top drawers of which each were locked, fully exposed to him and hand between her legs. The man released a groan as his aching cock twitched, and almost dropped the ice-bucket on the floor. I thought I said not to start without me. Bretts voice was husky and he barely managed to croak the words, gaze briefly meeting Elenas before it slid back down to the heels she still wore, and then halfway back up to witness her fingers dip in and out of her glistening cunt. Transfixed by the view, he had no idea how long he stood there before he eventually forced himself to move. Brett approached the bed, placed the ice-bucket and two glasses on the dresser adjacent to Elena, and gripped her wrist. He pulled it away from between her legs and smirked down. So, youll need to pay for that as well. Brett opened his hand to display the ice-cube in his palm, then lowered his arm to run the edge of it lightly across her clit. On his feet, beside and above her, he slipped two fingers second-knuckle deep into her pussy and drizzled ice-cold water onto her clit, simultaneously grasping the hair at the nape of her neck in his other hand. He used that as leverage to pull her torso off the bed, and bent to mash his lips against hers. Then, just as quickly, the man brokeShow MoreRelatedCreative Writing : A Short Story1020 Words   |  5 PagesThe girls sat seperated in two stark, cold rooms. Each of the girls was sat at a table with a clear plastic cup of water sitting at arm’s length from them, both cups untouched. How could they drink when their best friend was no where to be seen? They had been having an innocent night of fun at Mercedes’ house three weeks ago, the first of many planned for the spring break, watching movies on Netflix and eating a pizza they ordered. 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I plan on asking Miles to let all of you andRead MoreCreative Writing : A Short Story1148 Words   |  5 Pagesbench nearby. And that’s what she was doing now. She sighed and stood up to go home. The next day she went to school and her best friend Sarina asked, â€Å"What’s wrong?† She then told her the whole story as she didn’t know what happened yesterday because she was absent. Hearing the story she said, â€Å" It’s a good thing that I upgraded my remote few days ago. You should go to the remote shop today after school.† Then they both went to class. When Maya entered her first class she saw Tasha andRead MoreCreative Writing : A Short Story1583 Words   |  7 Pagesforbid, if you don’t find it within two seconds, then youre most definitely an incompetent driver. Almost needless to say, Jason didn’t follow in the outlier’s footsteps, and he aced the questionnaire. Though he did take note that his examiner was creative with her questions. She was probably was deeply saddened that there wasn’t a convoluted touch screen to inquire about, Jason thought to himself. Finally all the formalities were complete, consequently, he took a second to get himself mentally, andRead MoreCreative Writing : A Short Story1440 Words   |  6 PagesPayday arrived for both me and Patsy, giving us the opportunity to attend the luxurious cinema and a wider variety of movies. As we stand before the array of movie posters, deciding between an action or comedy, somehow, how conversation shifts over to John. â€Å"He was so excited about the other night,† says Patsy. I abandon the posters and give her a questioning look. â€Å"About what?† â€Å"Well, first of all spending the evening with you, and then because you hugged him the way you did.† She taps her fingerRead MoreCreative Writing : A Short Story1615 Words   |  7 Pagestown to barter, we’ll ask around.† Shocked that her husband knows about Miles tattoo on her arm, Rachel clings to him in the silence, her mind racing at the possible implications. XXX Rachel sits stunned at the table, listening to Ben relay the story that he’s heard over and over in the village nearest to the house they’ve decided to ride out the winter in. â€Å"Soul Marks? How is that possible? These are just replicas of tattoos,† she replies with a disbelieving shake of her head. Ben shrugged